Tuesday, October 25, 2011

craws  -
hairst's door sneckin
on roostie baunds




crows  -
autumn's door closing
on rusty hinges

4 comments:

  1. yes, now arriving here too


    the cold
    the north wind
    the crows

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  2. juxtaposition of sounds quite effective


    much love...

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  3. ... and the crow answers the call of these rusty hinges. Good, John. _m

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  4. Good one - very audible. Sometimes hard to find fresh ways to capture season change - but you've done it here!

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