I don't know if it should have done, but this one made me chuckle. Thanks
Very wistful John. Many ways to read it...
__Clearly, could be read as a -life cycle- that continued revolvement; yes the amusement, the chuckle, fully understood.__John, as always, a fine one!_m
A fine one, John...
Good one, John!
Would it be even better without "..." or even without "...but" I wonder? swans gatherbut today the old manfeeds the wormsor swans gather today the old manfeeds the worms
I didn't get a chuckle here, rather i find image touching, John...for more reasons than one, wishes, devika
very beautiful, light and dark. ( i agree with what the Poet in residence : maybe that but is superfluous.) :)
A good haiku!
I don't know if it should have done, but this one made me chuckle. Thanks
ReplyDeleteVery wistful John. Many ways to read it...
ReplyDelete__Clearly, could be read as a
ReplyDelete-life cycle- that continued revolvement; yes the amusement, the chuckle, fully understood.
__John, as always, a fine one!
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A fine one, John...
ReplyDeleteGood one, John!
ReplyDeleteWould it be even better without "..." or even without "...but" I wonder?
ReplyDeleteswans gather
but today the old man
feeds the worms
or
swans gather
today the old man
feeds the worms
I didn't get a chuckle here, rather i find image touching, John...for more reasons than one,
ReplyDeletewishes,
devika
very beautiful, light and dark. ( i agree with what the Poet in residence : maybe that but is superfluous.) :)
ReplyDeleteA good haiku!
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