Friday, September 03, 2010

...gaislins
haud by
i thair fedder boatties




...goslings
pass by
in their feather boats

3 comments:

  1. An image of independence, self reliance, even as they move together...very nice, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Catches the perception.

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  3. Well, I am afraid I can't see more in line b and c than an explanation of line a. Probably I am too tired to see the haiku in this haiku. May I ask for some help? Or will time help?

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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