Friday, August 06, 2010

the scriddan
gudgin-oot the cleuch -
a butterie jigs throuch




the torrent
gouging-out the gorge -
a butterfly dances through

5 comments:

  1. Good haiku, John :)
    lines 1/2 --so wonderfully put,

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Just another view on the butterfly's work. Very fine.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  3. the contrast is so clear; the butterfly adds just enough whimsy to the scene


    much love
    gillena

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  4. A -dance of the most fit-. Here, the butterfly.
    __Fine one John. _m

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