Monday, May 03, 2010

burdsang
tummlin frae the tree
gean flourish




birdsong
tumbling from the tree
cherry blossom

4 comments:

  1. I like this a lot John. "tumbling" is very apt word...

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  2. Great pivot, and, as Frank says, "tumbling" is a fine choice.

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  3. ... both the song and blossoms tumble... as always, John. _m

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  4. this is lovely John;
    actually Magyar one of my japanese haiku pals, Taro san, enlightened me during a renku; he said the blossoms are not what is falling, the petals are

    much love
    gillena

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