Friday, October 09, 2009

oot frae sheddae
swan's glister -
...jeelous day muin




out from shadow
swan's brilliance -
...jealous day moon

9 comments:

  1. Great movement, height and depth here John, good stuff.

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  2. absolutely superb!

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  3. thats John's brilliance :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. Great verse! And I am so happy, that I understood the Scots Haiku before I read the English version.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  5. aye a moon with ruffled feathers ,
    ho! ho!

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  6. very beautiful, swans are taking a rest now in the rivers or lakes in Akita, john san

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  7. Absolutely beautiful. Love the image. Enjoyed visiting here...see your name on several blogs that I visit regularly, so I don't know what took me so long to come here. :) Hope you'll visit mine as well.
    -KR

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