This haiku has great energy, "breaking through" - love it...
Energy yes, and hopefully great news ;)
i expected the postman to burst through anthing except the web, nice surprisemuch lovegillena
I agree with Frank, I like the sense of urgency in this one
This haiku has indeed "great energy" (Frank's comment). I like this haiku!Best wishes,Angelika
Breaking news! Black Widow attacked the postman!
Great - I immediately pictured the postman's demeanor. I burst through a web, myself, this morning - still finding bits of it in my hair.
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