Friday, September 18, 2009

brustin throuch a wab:
the postie
bringin uncos




bursting through a web:
the postman
bringing news

7 comments:

  1. This haiku has great energy, "breaking through" - love it...

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  2. Energy yes, and hopefully great news ;)

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  3. i expected the postman to burst through anthing except the web, nice surprise

    much love
    gillena

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  4. I agree with Frank, I like the sense of urgency in this one

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  5. This haiku has indeed "great energy" (Frank's comment).

    I like this haiku!

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

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  6. Breaking news!
    Black Widow
    attacked the postman!

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  7. Great - I immediately pictured the postman's demeanor. I burst through a web, myself, this morning - still finding bits of it in my hair.

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