Tuesday, March 03, 2009

licht throuch a hinmaist
vause o daffins
lichtens's oorie een




light through a last
vase of daffodils
brightens his fearful eyes

11 comments:

  1. ah, such emotion - love it!

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  2. why is he fearful? i questioned as i read and reread

    much love
    gillena

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  3. A mire of thoughts generated here, I think it best to simply say... full of wonder. _m

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  4. Very expressive one, John
    could be read in many ways...

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. this one makes me think!

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  6. Nice. I love the way the light is channelled through something, and somehow made brighter by that.

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  7. this is wonderful and poignant not only in view of the posts that will soon follow it but because every word adds to the whole and as we see the light, the first word, comes through all with its brightness although, and here's the nub, there's no claim or suggestion that it drives out the fear. All in nature, is only temporary. But the light goes on forever.

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