Friday, May 16, 2008

sookin'r bairn -
in the lift
a lang fite contrail

breast-feeding her child -
in the sky
a long white contrail


  1. very good!

    it`s so peaceful when a mother feeds her child (i remember this time so well!)-- heaven and earth are connected in these moments

    and in your haiku i feel this deep connection (heaven and earth, peace), too

    and this "white" (white contrail) is a wonderful connection too (contrail in the sky, milk)