Wednesday, December 05, 2007

wund i the lum -
brucken airticles
stour alang the causey




wind in the chimney -
broken things
race along the street

5 comments:

  1. i can hear and see this.

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  2. very vivid scene. a town after nuclear incident comes to mind - empty streets, left toys, wind all around...

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  3. I love the motion in this!

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  4. Our chimney is very noisy at the moment, making the board up chimney breast rattle and creak. Instead of complaining maybe I need to view it poetically.

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  5. Reminds me of the Pinocchio story.

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