Thursday, May 17, 2007

thigger wifie -
her sheddae
skiffs me




beggar woman -
her shadow
touches me
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3 comments:

  1. J. Andrew Lockhart9:24 PM

    yes, it does.

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  2. Borut7:25 AM

    There is power in shadows...

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  3. Anonymous6:33 AM

    Wonderful poetic technique, John! Behind the direct meaning, this "shadow" has many senses.

    felling
    the oak of my friend -
    I search his shadow

    Thank you

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