Sunday, February 18, 2007

lavein kirk
craw stauns in ma rod
leukin forritsome




leaving church
crow stands in my way
looking defiant

8 comments:

  1. You didn't give enough offertory?

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  2. love it.
    and lol to tikkis' comment

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  3. Great. They are such naturally assertive birds - we dare not step out of line!

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  4. The crows here chase cats! I don't like them.

    John, please contact me off-line.

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  5. Great haiku, I also love Juhani's comment (is Juhani Tikkis?).

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  6. there's a lot you can see in this one

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  7. Why didn't you go back to church, John!?:)An omen?:)

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  8. juhani = tikkis, blogspot seemed to accept my comment without signing in, but took my first name.

    There is no blog named 'juhani'.

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