Monday, July 27, 2009

wund throuch the treen -
the raggit lip
o a bleckie's sang




wind through the trees -
the ragged edge
of a blackbird's song

8 comments:

  1. very nice; Line 2 is very well expressed

    much love
    gillena

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  2. not breeze-like wind but gale-like wind...
    impressive! McDonald San

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  3. Amazes me, as always....

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  4. ragged edge..sounded too squeaky?? :)

    Good one, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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