Saturday, July 11, 2009

a lane bummer
stravaigs
the stoundin flourishins




a solitary bee
wanders
the aching blossoms

7 Comments:

Blogger Paul Smith said...

John I love 'the aching blossoms', it speaks on many levels.

3:48 AM

 
Blogger Devika said...

Love this, John :)

wishes,
devika

6:01 AM

 
Blogger Ashi said...

nice one John.

3:10 AM

 
Blogger RBroeker said...

Stravaigs! A wonderful word! Do the blossoms ache 'cause they die? Makes me think a lot, this haiku.

Best wishes
Ralf

12:46 PM

 
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

good one!

8:21 PM

 
Blogger magiceye said...

this is fantastic!!

1:36 AM

 
Blogger jem said...

So sad. At so many levels. It seems quite apt for this erratic summer. I'm sure there are lots of lonely insects and flowers.

4:22 AM

 

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