Wednesday, July 15, 2009

hail watter -
the hameless chiel's
wattered-doon bree




torrents of rain -
the homeless man's
watered-down soup
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4 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi5:58 PM

    THIS IS SAD, though i appreciate the haiku moment, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Masago7:02 PM

    Ha ha!!!

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  3. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)12:35 PM

    Poor man!

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  4. jem4:24 AM

    You are good at these John. You speak for those that poetry might overlook, and it's never about an agenda, it's just true observation.

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