deid i the girse
a bummer - its weengs
gildin ma fingers
dead in the grass
a bee - its wings
gilding my fingers
posted by John McDonald at 7:23 AM
Thursday, July 02, 2009
a bummer - its weengs
gildin ma fingers
dead in the grass
a bee - its wings
gilding my fingers
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9 Comments:
I can feel that, John
and a kindness in the words,
wishes,
devika
8:05 AM
I meant to say I could feel the kindness in your words, John
devika
8:08 AM
i agree with Devika.
such intimacy.
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1:26 PM
yes, this is good.
8:39 PM
nice one John,
catching some of the magic.
11:27 PM
We have to have the heart to feel. Good one.
Best wishes
Ralf
7:59 AM
I would love to hear the sound of this ".../... - its weengs/gildin ma fingers"!
A good haiku!
Best wishes,
Angelika
11:42 AM
A magical moment John...
11:14 AM
nice one John - 'gilding' is a good touch
5:44 AM
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