Thursday, July 02, 2009

deid i the girse
a bummer - its weengs
gildin ma fingers




dead in the grass
a bee - its wings
gilding my fingers
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9 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi8:05 AM

    I can feel that, John
    and a kindness in the words,


    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Devika Jyothi8:08 AM

    I meant to say I could feel the kindness in your words, John

    devika

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  3. Laurie A.1:26 PM

    i agree with Devika.

    such intimacy.

    www.laure01.blogspot.com

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  4. J. Andrew Lockhart8:39 PM

    yes, this is good.

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  5. Ashi11:27 PM

    nice one John,
    catching some of the magic.

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  6. Ralf Bröker7:59 AM

    We have to have the heart to feel. Good one.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  7. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)11:42 AM

    I would love to hear the sound of this ".../... - its weengs/gildin ma fingers"!

    A good haiku!

    Best wishes,
    Angelika

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  8. Frank...11:14 AM

    A magical moment John...

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  9. Emma Dalloway5:44 AM

    nice one John - 'gilding' is a good touch

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