Saturday, July 18, 2009

faw'n rose petal -
a peerie eemock
sclims a reid muntain




fallen rose petal -
a tiny ant
climbs a red mountain
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10 comments:

  1. Laurie A.7:09 AM

    i really like the juxtaposition of the fallen petal and the ant climbing the red mountain.

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  2. Frank...8:12 AM

    Only a haiku poet would notice such small detail - nice one John...

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  3. Magyar8:46 AM

    One thing for one being... quite another... for another. (being)

    Great one, John. _m

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  4. Devika Jyothi9:29 AM

    I agree with Frank...fine haiku, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. Paul Smith10:47 AM

    Great haiku John.

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  6. Gillena Cox2:49 PM

    a grand little haiku

    much love
    gillena

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  7. Ričardas11:31 PM

    It's amassing how many thoughts and feelings few tiny lines can provoke. Nice.

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  8. Emma Dalloway12:40 AM

    Ive been away for just a few days and ive missed so many...
    A great set, this one particularly

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  9. haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert)2:31 AM

    So nice!

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  10. Hiruta4:12 PM

    McDonald san
    Fantastic haiku!
    Creative, and Pleasant!
    Hidenori Hiruta

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