craw
reenges a crisp poke
...hern's sneist




crow
searches a crisp packet
 ...heron's disdain

up an doon
the wab threid
the sin's finger pizzicatos




up and down
the web's thread
the sun's finger pizzicatos

on the platform
eildit trainspotters
...stame poorin frae thayr mous



on the platform
aged trainspotters
...steam pouring from their mouths

hairst leaves fawin  -
on a peerie lassie's heid
a croun




autumn leaves falling  -
on a little girl's head
a crown

freesty mornin 
jookin intae the greenhoose
...a haiku taks ruit




frosty morning 
nipping into the greenhouse
...a haiku takes root

scushin leaves  -
hairst
shenachies




shuffling leaves  -
autumn
storytellers

armistice day
it the rugby cairn
...wull thae ken we touched doon?



armistice day
at the rugby memorial
...will they know we touched down?