Just wonderful, John.
the wind has been on my mind these days too.such a clear image here.
A very clear powerful haiku John, I really enjoyed this one.
thats like a movie commentary Good haiku, John :) wishes, devika
A great little moment in little great words, again.Best wishesRalf
a war between quills and feathers -- ? - ?
Good one. It's like they are ripping up the wind, and in turn it's having a go at them.