I love this John. The third line, 'heads bent' adds an extra dimension to this haiku which really lifts it up...
I agree with Frank, John :)and this is a scene we often see, beautiful, but some sadness to it, wishes, devika
A contradiction...agreeing with Frank and seeing a sadness, but thats what I felt here, :)wishes, devika
excellent. once again, your blog fails to disappoint.
even flowers take on the countenance of their surroundings. i can see why this verse was the winner. beautiful.
it must be evening time; time for vespers as indicated by the flowers having bent, a serene picture sketched. much lovegillena
Powerful thought. _m
It is indeed a winner. Very well done!
I see why it won. :)
yes, very good
I do like this haiku!
Place and what has taken place - both make a new thing: a haiku thing.Best wishesRalf
I love this John. The third line, 'heads bent' adds an extra dimension to this haiku which really lifts it up...
ReplyDeleteI agree with Frank, John :)
ReplyDeleteand this is a scene we often see,
beautiful, but some sadness to it,
wishes,
devika
A contradiction...agreeing with Frank and seeing a sadness,
ReplyDeletebut thats what I felt here, :)
wishes,
devika
excellent. once again, your blog fails to disappoint.
ReplyDeleteeven flowers take on the countenance of their surroundings. i can see why this verse was the winner. beautiful.
ReplyDeleteit must be evening time; time for vespers as indicated by the flowers having bent, a serene picture sketched.
ReplyDeletemuch love
gillena
Powerful thought. _m
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed a winner. Very well done!
ReplyDeleteI see why it won. :)
ReplyDeleteyes, very good
ReplyDeleteI do like this haiku!
ReplyDeletePlace and what has taken place - both make a new thing: a haiku thing.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ralf