Monday, March 09, 2009

anither auld fere's
cremation -
feelin the hait




another old friend's
cremation -
feeling the heat

8 comments:

  1. Sensing the nearness; realism... not fatalism.
    Another good one, John
    _m

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  2. A lovely poem John. I like the subtle humour.

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  3. Nice one John, my father has a saying; now I sit on the bench next in line....

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  4. i seldom go for cremations, yet i could feel the heat here!

    but it makes me smile too :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. Nice surprise in line 3: a humorous acceptance of what must be.

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  6. I like the double meaning in that last time. It does feel like life or death is chasing you sometimes.

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