I'm very impressed. I used a quote from Don Paterson to start a poem on my blog awhile ago and these feel something like to me - . . . hauf-jyned, hauf rift thir heids doverin unner the licht yock o the lift. But how do I subscribe so I can find my way back again?
Strange and familiar - the scene, the sound and your haiku. And than this wonderful word for playing ball or kicking: somewhere between flowers, cakes and sea mammals. Thank you.
different, and yet the same... good one
ReplyDeleteright time for me...I love watching football, and with laughter and birdsong :)
ReplyDeleteNice one, John :)
wishes,
devika
right time for me...I love watching football, and with laughter and birdsong..it would be a treat! :)
ReplyDeleteJohn your poem also makes a great zip haiku
ReplyDeleteimmigrants playing football
the laughter amongst the birdsong
Zip Haiku
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much love
gillena
great subject, a feel good haiku
ReplyDeleteI'm very impressed. I used a quote from Don Paterson to start a poem on my blog awhile ago and these feel something like to me - . . . hauf-jyned, hauf rift
ReplyDeletethir heids doverin
unner the licht
yock
o the lift.
But how do I subscribe so I can find my way back again?
Enjoyed.
ReplyDeleteStrange and familiar - the scene, the sound and your haiku. And than this wonderful word for playing ball or kicking: somewhere between flowers, cakes and sea mammals. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteRalf
super!
ReplyDeleteSitting
ReplyDeleteand listening
the birds singing.