stunning, John. You're so prolific lately.
John, this has a haunting quality. Absolutely superb!
ah I like this one John.
great, and so true...
Voices. _From the cacophony in the pillow (as I see this) to the wispers of the daffodils. These are standouts, John. _m
remove the pillow, voices still remain!good one, JohnI like Magyar's comment....ultimately one finds/should find some peace to sleep wellwishes, devika
wow! line 3 is wonderful!
this is brilliant
Very good senryu!Best wishesRalf
i want to add to Devika's; i say remove the mouthmuch lovegillena
Wonderful, John. This really catches the essence of those sleepless nights.