stunning, John. You're so prolific lately.
John, this has a haunting quality. Absolutely superb!
ah I like this one John.
great, and so true...
Superb John...
Voices. _From the cacophony in the pillow (as I see this) to the wispers of the daffodils. These are standouts, John. _m
remove the pillow, voices still remain!good one, JohnI like Magyar's comment....ultimately one finds/should find some peace to sleep wellwishes, devika
wow! line 3 is wonderful!
this is brilliant
Very good senryu!Best wishesRalf
i want to add to Devika's; i say remove the mouthmuch lovegillena
Oy
Wonderful, John. This really catches the essence of those sleepless nights.
stunning, John. You're so prolific lately.
ReplyDeleteJohn, this has a haunting quality. Absolutely superb!
ReplyDeleteah I like this one John.
ReplyDeletegreat, and so true...
ReplyDeleteSuperb John...
ReplyDeleteVoices.
ReplyDelete_From the cacophony in the pillow (as I see this) to the wispers of the daffodils. These are standouts, John.
_m
remove the pillow, voices still remain!
ReplyDeletegood one, John
I like Magyar's comment....ultimately one finds/should find some peace to sleep well
wishes,
devika
wow! line 3 is wonderful!
ReplyDeletethis is brilliant
ReplyDeleteVery good senryu!
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Ralf
i want to add to Devika's; i say remove the mouth
ReplyDeletemuch love
gillena
Oy
ReplyDeleteWonderful, John. This really catches the essence of those sleepless nights.
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