really nicemuch lovegillena
Pleasent thought... without a "marching band" presenting them, the spring leaves silently occur._m
this is so lovely
Nicely put...
Theres so much on offer here.I cant get enough of your Scottish brogue. And the haiku is beautifully done.
This is lovely, JohnBusy, street, silence, leaves are words I love...and so nice to see all joined to give a nice poem :)wishes, devika
Very effective contrast in this one, John.
Made a variation from Turku-streets :-)Slushy street --melting snow creeping
Excuse me John -- a message for Tikkis...."Slushy street --melting snow creeping"Take care of your feet or shoes! :)Melting snow in slushy street can be really dirty and creepy as you say! wishes, devika
Oh that's good - the calm of noticing what you can't hear.
really nice
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gillena
Pleasent thought... without a "marching band" presenting them, the spring leaves silently occur.
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this is so lovely
ReplyDeleteNicely put...
ReplyDeleteTheres so much on offer here.
ReplyDeleteI cant get enough of your Scottish brogue. And the haiku is beautifully done.
This is lovely, John
ReplyDeleteBusy, street, silence, leaves are words I love...and so nice to see all joined to give a nice poem :)
wishes,
devika
Very effective contrast in this one, John.
ReplyDeleteMade a variation from Turku-streets :-)
ReplyDeleteSlushy street --
melting snow
creeping
Excuse me John -- a message for Tikkis....
ReplyDelete"Slushy street --
melting snow
creeping"
Take care of your feet or shoes! :)
Melting snow in slushy street can be really dirty and creepy as you say!
wishes,
devika
Oh that's good - the calm of noticing what you can't hear.
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