Wednesday, March 11, 2009

in a thrang causey:
the seelence
o leaves unfurlin




in a busy street:
the silence
of leaves unfurling

12 comments:

  1. really nice

    much love
    gillena

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  2. Pleasent thought... without a "marching band" presenting them, the spring leaves silently occur.
    _m

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  3. this is so lovely

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  4. Theres so much on offer here.

    I cant get enough of your Scottish brogue. And the haiku is beautifully done.

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  5. This is lovely, John

    Busy, street, silence, leaves are words I love...and so nice to see all joined to give a nice poem :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  6. Very effective contrast in this one, John.

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  7. Made a variation from Turku-streets :-)

    Slushy street --
    melting snow
    creeping

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  8. Excuse me John -- a message for Tikkis....

    "Slushy street --
    melting snow
    creeping"

    Take care of your feet or shoes! :)

    Melting snow in slushy street can be really dirty and creepy as you say!

    wishes,
    devika

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  9. Oh that's good - the calm of noticing what you can't hear.

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