Sensing the nearness; realism... not fatalism.Another good one, John_m
A lovely poem John. I like the subtle humour.
Nice one John, my father has a saying; now I sit on the bench next in line....
oh, L3- love it!
i seldom go for cremations, yet i could feel the heat here! but it makes me smile too :)wishes, devika
Nice surprise in line 3: a humorous acceptance of what must be.
I like the double meaning in that last time. It does feel like life or death is chasing you sometimes.