I like the feeling of movement in this haiku…
Silent and slowly moving, the cloud is the swan. love the parallel, John. _m
winding indeed... well done
a fine capture of "natural" movements...the juxtaposition of cloud and swan works so well,Good one, Johnwishes, devika
yes, the wind- we're getting it here.
Very nice John
Lovely. (I just saw five swans moving northwards; too early I suppose.)
I like the sense that the swan could be real, or could be a shape in the cloud.