Monday, March 23, 2009

merch wunds -
a bygaun clud
a muckle swan




march winds -
a passing cloud
a huge swan

9 comments:

  1. I like the feeling of movement in this haiku…

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  2. Silent and slowly moving, the cloud is the swan. love the parallel, John. _m

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  3. winding indeed... well done

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  4. a fine capture of "natural" movements...

    the juxtaposition of cloud and swan works so well,

    Good one, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  5. yes, the wind- we're getting it here.

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  6. Lovely. (I just saw five swans moving northwards; too early I suppose.)

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  7. great observation

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  8. I like the sense that the swan could be real, or could be a shape in the cloud.

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