Monday, March 16, 2009

swan i this peerie dub:
preein the tide
i the weet




swan in this tiny pond:
tasting the ocean
in the rain

8 comments:

  1. Ah... Day of the Swan, and this too, has a -taste- of loneliness
    Fine one John. _m

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  2. WOW!

    that was simply fantastic, John...like seeing the universe in a dewdrop.:)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. The salty Highland rain. Yes, I've tasted it too. Islay, Malaig, Mull; places too beautiful for words.

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  4. An evocative haiku...

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  5. John both are great. You really know how to say it.

    love-bd

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  6. i like the reversal, taking place here

    much love
    gillena

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  7. This makes me feel very sad. Although I'm aware that sometimes swans seem to choose unlikely places to settle themselves. A few years ago a couple took up residence in a little children's paddling pool in a nearby park, but seemed quite happy there.

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