Tuesday, March 10, 2009

voar yirdin -
cannily intae the yirth
cannily hapt




spring funeral -
carefully into the earth
carefully covered

8 comments:

  1. the finality is well resonated in your repitition;
    i have to sing at a funeral mass tommorrow

    much love
    gillena

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  2. you will do well I'm sure (I was at one last night)
    john

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  3. touching one, John

    someone really really cares...and that is so nice to know...


    wishes,
    devika

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  4. A rare instance of repetition done right.

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  5. the repetition of "carefully" has poetic power, a good decision

    best wishes,
    Angelika

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  6. Very gentle - loving even - and that repetition of 'carefully' is well done - I'm feeling like someone is being put to bed.

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