Saturday, November 14, 2009

tichtenin bowts
oan the ferris wheel:
fankilt skirls lowsit




tightening bolts
on the ferris wheel:
trapped screams freed

9 comments:

  1. Oh! good one, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Ha ha... good one.

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  3. 'fankilt skirls lowsit'??? No wonder I never understood anyone when I travelled around Scotlan

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  4. no evidence of any rusty wheels in the old grey matter at zen speug i'm pleased to note ;>)

    Poor Dalloway, you're not meant to understand them - just go with the flow...

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  5. something to think next time i ride a ferris wheel, good one john...

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  6. a dark ale helped, poet

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  7. Dalloway, me too. They did me in with copious pints of heavy. In fact it rapidly turned into a Sunday afternoon 'lock-in'.
    A fine Glaswegian tradition as I was given to understand.

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  8. This is a quirky and interesting one John. I like it a lot!

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