Thursday, November 12, 2009

throuch the treen
the wund
threipin an aul sang




through the trees
the wind
telling an old story

6 Comments:

Blogger Devika said...

heard it many times....good one, again John :)

wishes,
devika

3:40 AM

 
Blogger Poet in Residence said...

ach Jon , you got me that time - thought it was going to end
'singing an old song' :)

7:25 AM

 
Blogger RBroeker said...

The Scots wind is a bit younger than the English one. And the Scots story is younger ... Very good.

Best wishes
Ralf

3:06 PM

 
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

the wind
telling stories
howls and shss

much love
gillena

1:37 AM

 
Blogger Janet said...

evocative and pleasing:-)

9:50 AM

 
Blogger Hiruta said...

The other day I wrote the following haiku:

Autumn wind
reciting lover's ode
messenger

Best regards,
Hiruta

7:00 PM

 

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