Monday, November 09, 2009

freest -
follaein a sinblink
throuch skitie causeys




frost -
following a sunbeam
through slippery streets

8 Comments:

Blogger Gillena Cox said...

chasing sunbeams; nice

much love
gillena

2:31 PM

 
Blogger Devika said...

Wonderful....finally one jumps into the fire of the sun! :)

don't know why i reading the unsaid...anyway, that was a nice haiku, John :)

wishes,
devika

7:04 PM

 
Blogger Dalloway said...

wonderful - full of light

9:32 PM

 
Blogger Nana Fredua-Agyeman said...

is it snowing? nice ku.

11:31 PM

 
Blogger Poet in Residence said...

brrrr!

1:23 AM

 
Blogger Ashi said...

following Devika, a love that can not be :)

1:54 PM

 
Blogger Masago said...

Well done.

6:32 PM

 
Blogger Bill said...

"following a sunbeam" makes frost attractive.

7:26 PM

 

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