oot frae the haar
a swan
furmin
out from the mist
a swan
forming
posted by John McDonald at 3:28 AM
Monday, June 29, 2009
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8 Comments:
a fine haiku, John :)
wishes,
devika
4:22 AM
the swan
the strong and ancient image
of former times
nice one john!
4:38 AM
A very atmospheric haiku John...
6:36 AM
The mist fades... . Fine one John.
_m
6:17 PM
i like the thought in this one
8:36 PM
Captures the moment.
5:40 AM
Very shot, very impressing.
Best wishes
Ralf
6:35 AM
Short! Sorry.
Best wishes
Ralf
6:36 AM
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