Monday, June 08, 2009

atween the pages
a deid flee -
a sneckit buik




between the pages
a dead fly -
a closed book
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8 comments:

  1. Devika Jyothi6:58 PM

    hope it didn't eat the pages! :)

    good one, John

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Masago7:37 PM

    ha ha!

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  3. Gillena Cox5:43 AM

    this one's for a chuckle


    much love
    gillena

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  4. Magyar11:27 AM

    slam
    the page dust flies
    bookmark

    Yup, a differant -fly-. Yours, a fine picture John! _m

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  5. Frank...11:42 AM

    A very evocative haiku John, with so many layers - nice one...

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  6. Ashi2:10 PM

    applause from here.
    a good one John.

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  7. magiceye3:06 AM

    fantastic!

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  8. jem8:06 AM

    Made me smile. You can't go wrong with a dead fly haiku!

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