Monday, June 08, 2009

atween the pages
a deid flee -
a sneckit buik




between the pages
a dead fly -
a closed book

8 Comments:

Blogger Devika said...

hope it didn't eat the pages! :)

good one, John

wishes,
devika

6:58 PM

 
Blogger Masago said...

ha ha!

7:37 PM

 
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

this one's for a chuckle


much love
gillena

5:43 AM

 
Blogger Magyar said...

slam
the page dust flies
bookmark

Yup, a differant -fly-. Yours, a fine picture John! _m

11:27 AM

 
Blogger Frank Williams said...

A very evocative haiku John, with so many layers - nice one...

11:42 AM

 
Blogger Ashi said...

applause from here.
a good one John.

2:10 PM

 
Blogger magiceye said...

fantastic!

3:06 AM

 
Blogger jem said...

Made me smile. You can't go wrong with a dead fly haiku!

8:06 AM

 

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