murners win awa -
beadles crack on fitbaw
duntin sheelfous o cley
mourners leave -
gravediggers talk football
thumping shovelfulls of clay
posted by John McDonald at 3:25 PM
Thursday, June 18, 2009
beadles crack on fitbaw
duntin sheelfous o cley
mourners leave -
gravediggers talk football
thumping shovelfulls of clay
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10 Comments:
This seems good to me, John
life must go on...
wishes,
devika
7:42 PM
pure reality...
9:09 PM
I always read the scots version first and must admit I had no idea what 'beadles crack fitbaw' was...
I like Devikas comment...
4:12 AM
Just a job... a situation well put John.
_m
4:30 AM
great use of the word 'thumping' - like it
5:08 AM
thanks emma - I missed out 'on'
john
6:18 AM
That's life!
Well done!
1:37 AM
yup life goes on with thankfullness
much love
gillena
9:54 AM
talking deep --
two meters
of clay
11:22 AM
Clay, sports, sadness - there are mnay things to dig every day. There is always something at the end of living. In the majority of cases ... it is a wooden case. Great haiku, great sound in the gaelic one.
Best wishes
Ralf
6:02 AM
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