airlie Mass -
the kist o whustles
pechin
early Mass -
the organ
wheezing
posted by John McDonald at 3:53 PM
Tuesday, June 09, 2009
the kist o whustles
pechin
early Mass -
the organ
wheezing
- atween the pages a deid flee - a sneckit buik ...
- crans mair swith this towmond swifts swifter t...
- on the clartie burn swans daizzlin on the mudd...
- her pianny - stour on the keys her piano - d...
- cluds creepin nar - gey lik a weir clouds cre...
- snail's mindin i the nicht - glaizie necklace ...
- furst day o simmer - yella gowan tassies fou o si...
- ikebana on the altar treenity o carnations ike...
- the wund cleedin'm in clouts - humphed hern th...
- in the green tae her mongolian een - the tassie's ...
8 Comments:
very good - sounds cold
(I like kist o whustles - far better sounding than organ)
9:55 PM
Gasping, wheezing...breathing problems with all and sundry here...and now the organ too!!
but i like the haiku, John :)
wishes,
devika
10:55 PM
I love old organs- you don't see many of them around here anymore...
8:19 AM
Wheeze is a great word for that. And sometimes I feel like this organ too. Interesting way of partnership. Very nice haiku.
Best wishes
Ralf
9:30 AM
A well captured moment...
1:33 AM
Some of the congregation, too, I'll bet. By the way, if it's a weekday morning, that might be worth specifying. Although masses are offered at various times of day, I think "morning" may be regarded as the default mode. And, if it's Sunday, would "early mass" say a little more; I think "sunday" is also default mode.
weekday Mass . . .
early Mass . . .
8:05 AM
well noticed Bill - it should have been early
john
1:01 AM
Wow!
I like it (especially line 3)!
7:43 AM
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