Tuesday, May 05, 2009

doverin i the perk
a hameless chiel:
lyart wi thrisseldoon




asleep in the park
a homeless man:
grizzled with thistledown

9 comments:

  1. homelessness is definitely a global problem,

    but, in a way its so nice to live a carefree life,

    nice one, John!

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Oh i said "nice one" -- I meant to say "sad one" :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  3. Thistledown - I didn't now what it was. Now I do and understand. Looks like cut hair and reminds me of Samson and the power he lost. Great view on this item.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  4. a few ways to see this...
    good one

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  5. John, well done! _m

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  6. Smashing haiku John. I love the word "grizzled"...

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  7. the third line makes this one

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  8. Great last line - sounds so good aloud!

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