Saturday, May 09, 2009

on's shall
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snail streeks oot yin ee




on his shell
rain
snail stretches out one eye

8 comments:

  1. brilliant - love it

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  2. The Gaelic words sound peerless!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  3. Haha!

    I am just imagining the scene, John :))

    wishes,
    devika

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  4. tickled my insides!

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  5. i like about this haiku, the ability to stop and concentrate on something else

    much love
    gillena

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  6. a great moment of awareness

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  7. theres not enough haiku about snails... youve inspired me to watch my snail in the fish tank

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  8. Simply love this John

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