Tuesday, May 05, 2009

slawer nor confetti:
gean flourish
faws aboot the cailleach




slower than confetti:
cherry blossom
falls about the old lady

8 comments:

  1. Nice, John :)

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. Slower? Yes. But they promise life. Confetti announces the Lenten season. Good one, John.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  3. go for it old lady!

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  4. whatever made you think of that?
    -haikai!

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  5. I really like this.

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  6. I think Im going to start using the word cailleach...

    a wonderful haiku

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  7. Nice image. I like that you noticed and perhaps she didn't - and 'slower than confetti' is a great opening line.

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