Wednesday, May 27, 2009

throuch the weet:
maws skirlin
the ceetie fissin




through the rain:
gulls screaming
the city hissing

7 comments:

  1. Life is full swing!
    Good one, John :)

    seems it would rain tonight/tomorrow here

    wishes,
    devika

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  2. You get some strange noises in the city - nice one John...

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  3. Years ago this would have been a seaside-haiku. Now seagulls are houndred of miles inland, close to landfills and quarry ponds. I like the sound of your verse!

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  4. Instantly reminded me of Aberdeen for some reason. Not visited there for a very long time. Superb haiku

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  5. interesting contrast

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  6. Very interesting - got to be a draw between city and gulls

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  7. Great sound images.

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