wake - wake !You have so many haiku here, spending quite a lot time among those, tasting many Scottish words...Cheers from Tikkis
Great poem John, I feel I could step straight into the scene.
Fantastic. Goes well together with Polona's haiku "Overnight".Best wishesRalf
setting sunbehind the blossomnimbus
A fine picture in words, John...'sinking' gives it an extra depth :)wishes, devika