Tuesday, May 26, 2009

sin slumpin -
anither heid
amang the puppies




sun sinking -
another head
among the poppies

7 comments:

  1. wake - wake !


    You have so many haiku here, spending quite a lot time among those, tasting many Scottish words...

    Cheers from Tikkis

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  2. Great poem John, I feel I could step straight into the scene.

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  3. Fantastic. Goes well together with Polona's haiku "Overnight".

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  4. setting sun
    behind the blossom
    nimbus

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  5. A fine picture in words, John...'sinking' gives it an extra depth :)

    wishes,
    devika

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