Friday, May 04, 2007

atween clematis leaves
the crottilt warl
o the lameter wifie




between clematis leaves
the fragmented world
of the crippled lady

5 comments:

  1. yes, poignant...
    love it!

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  2. this one makes me think -- I love ones like that

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  3. It feels like this haiku is a frame allowing us to look through into an individuals world. Very powerful.

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  4. It is really a wonderful poem, ma freen. The fragmented image and the fragmented world inside the mind of the powerless lady.
    A true model which inspires me... you will see :)

    Thank you very much for sharing.

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