Thursday, May 17, 2007

thigger wifie -
her sheddae
skiffs me




beggar woman -
her shadow
touches me

4 comments:

  1. There is power in shadows...

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  2. Wonderful poetic technique, John! Behind the direct meaning, this "shadow" has many senses.

    felling
    the oak of my friend -
    I search his shadow

    Thank you

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