the mull's
lanely watter-wheel -
the drouthie burn
the mill's
lonely water-wheel -
the dried-up stream
posted by John McDonald at 1:57 AM
Wednesday, May 09, 2007
lanely watter-wheel -
the drouthie burn
the mill's
lonely water-wheel -
the dried-up stream
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2 Comments:
poignant!
11:52 AM
I found many Japanese aesthetic categories in your poem:"ryuko", "wabi", "sabi". I like it very much.
the mill's
broken wheel reminds me
of the stream
7:50 AM
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