Wednesday, May 09, 2007

the mull's
lanely watter-wheel -
the drouthie burn




the mill's
lonely water-wheel -
the dried-up stream

2 comments:

  1. I found many Japanese aesthetic categories in your poem:"ryuko", "wabi", "sabi". I like it very much.

    the mill's
    broken wheel reminds me
    of the stream

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