Friday, May 11, 2007

the bodach
tentie o the rackets -
sterns in's een




the old man
watching the fireworks -
stars in his eyes

7 comments:

  1. Delightful, John!

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  2. I like this! When do they have fireworks there? Here, it's only on the 4th of July.

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  3. after any large outdoor event and of course on new-year's eve
    john

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  4. Loads of layers here. I feel as if he is thinking back to all the fireworks he has seen and those he has sparked in others perhaps.

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  5. A very beautiful poem, nostalgic and suggestive.

    fireworks...
    nothing compares
    to stars

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