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Thursday, May 10, 2007

craw heaves up
frae the dub
...cheen o glentin draplets




crow rises
from the puddle
...chain of sparkling droplets

posted by John McDonald at 4:55 AM

4 Comments:

Blogger polona said...

beautiful!

12:00 PM

 
Blogger Masago said...

beautiful!

6:01 PM

 
Blogger J. Andrew Lockhart said...

I love line 3!

9:46 PM

 
Blogger magiceye said...

superb imagery

7:20 AM

 

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