I like this a lot John. "tumbling" is very apt word...
Great pivot, and, as Frank says, "tumbling" is a fine choice.
... both the song and blossoms tumble... as always, John. _m
this is lovely John; actually Magyar one of my japanese haiku pals, Taro san, enlightened me during a renku; he said the blossoms are not what is falling, the petals aremuch lovegillena