Wednesday, May 26, 2010

wi's razzor
he pynts tae the fou muin -
his sowpied neb




with his razor
he points to the full moon -
his lathered face
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6 comments:

  1. Gillena Cox8:23 AM

    really nice:)

    much love
    gillena

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  2. Ralf Bröker5:21 PM

    Both ask for a shave and the man will get it. Very male haiku - I like it a lot.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  3. yozh7:03 PM

    a wonderful comparison...
    I've been working my way through your archives, amazing haiku.
    http://haikuproject.wordpress.com/

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  4. Bill7:59 PM

    Good match.

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  5. Magyar3:49 PM

    the man
    in the moon...
    on the mirror

    Another singer, John. _m

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  6. Dave Serjeant5:18 AM

    excellent haiku

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