Wednesday, May 26, 2010

wi's razzor
he pynts tae the fou muin -
his sowpied neb




with his razor
he points to the full moon -
his lathered face

7 comments:

  1. really nice:)

    much love
    gillena

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  2. Both ask for a shave and the man will get it. Very male haiku - I like it a lot.

    Best wishes
    Ralf

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  3. a wonderful comparison...
    I've been working my way through your archives, amazing haiku.
    http://haikuproject.wordpress.com/

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  4. the man
    in the moon...
    on the mirror

    Another singer, John. _m

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