Sunday, May 23, 2010

sin
takkin ma pictur -
bleck on the burn




sun
taking my picture -
monochrome on the stream

3 comments:

  1. An evocative image, John...

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  2. Oh--"bleck on the burn" so much more evocative than "monochrome on the stream" -- might be my new favorite phrase of the week. :)
    I love your haiku, thanks for sharing.

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