Wednesday, April 28, 2010

swan
happit in a sloom -
panderin muin




swan
wrapped in sleep -
drifting moon

6 comments:

  1. A serene set, John. "wrapped in sleep" is a very apt expression...

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  2. ... and they do wrap in their sleep. So well written, John. _m

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  3. very vivid i can almost see the elegant bird, poised

    much love
    gillena

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  4. I like very much the second haïku.

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