Friday, April 09, 2010

fankilt agin the lozen:
bummer's feem
fous the chaumer




trapped against the pane:
bee's anger
fills the room

5 comments:

  1. I too have witnessed that John. There is a definitely distinctive noise when a bee is angry. An evocative haiku...

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  2. They keep flying into the window... and the volumn rises.
    __Quite a picture. _m

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  3. That sense of concentrated power.

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  4. A fizzer! a pun on pane so strong
    & they don't understand.

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